Sunday, March 25, 2012

Sunday Comics, Day 9. Bronx Angel: Born Leader (Page 8)

Bronx Angel: Born Leader--Page 8.
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As a storyteller, one of the best ways to convey information to your audience is to allow the reader to overhear characters giving an opinion on something.  For example, want to get across the idea that some female character is promiscuous?  Have a couple of the jocks call her a slut while they're changing in the locker room after football practice.

Here, I wanted to get the idea across that Angel's unit is taking heavy fire.  That's the purpose of this page.  In storytelling terms, it's Development.  Which is to say that this is the part where things get worse for the hero.

As always, click the Sunday Comics tab below to read the story from the beginning.

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