Bronx Angel: Politics by Another Method, Pages 2-3. I doubt you'll be able to read this without clicking to see the full sized image. Click here. |
For me, I wrote this when I was working in the Bronx as an Overhead Construction Supervisor. So the Bronx is a place that's near and dear to our hearts, both mine and Sally's, and we worked together to try to get the patois of the place correct.
The idea here was that Angel was supposed to be a mixed-race kid--half black and half Latino. And like a lot of sort of later-generation kids from Latino immigrant families, his Spanish isn't so much Spanish as it is Spanglish. I like how this came out, but Sally makes fun of me for Angel's pronunciation of "Momma."
The above, of course, is the greyscaled page from the five-page preview. The actual page in the book appears below.
BA:PBAM, pages 2-3, original format. Click here to see these pages at full size. |
I know dear you didn't listen to me. I would recommend "mama" but it still came out fine. I do miss those days in the Bronx.
ReplyDeleteI miss the Bronx, too, but I think that by the end of the week, I'll be ready for my nice, warm office again.
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