I Finally Figured Out...

...what was wrong with a scene today. It's from an older story, literally been bothering me for years. Unfortunately, now I have to re-write the whole thing from scratch, but what can you do?

Anyway, at least now I have something to work on tomorrow morning. 

*sigh*

This whole writing thing makes me feel like a madman. And obsessing on the details like this can't possibly be good for a guy's personality. 

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Did I mention that Sally's first post is going up tomorrow?  It totally is. Be up at 5:00am. 

I've already read it. It's cool. Look for it.