Sketch in my Notebook (Part 6): The New Centurion
One of the tough parts of doing a story like this is that you can't go back and make changes as your ideas evolve. That happened this week, but I couldn't go back and retroactively rename last week's piece, even though in retrospect, the title for this chapter obviously needed to be "The New Centurion" rather than "The Ice Queen." I also feel like we've spent too much time in backstory here in the early-going, but what can you do? When I do go back and finally edit this thing, some of this stuff may well get the axe. In the meantime, though, you're stuck with the first cut. Hopefully it's at least the best first cut I can put out. With all of that said, I'm inordinately pleased with this week's piece. That probably means that no one else is gonna like it at all , but I still think it came out well. But my opinion only matters so much; you'll have to let me know what you think. Finally, this is it. This version